BBC News grammatical triumphs
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The conversation, about a proposed holiday and planning a surprise party for a friend, was conducted both at usually speaking level and exaggeratedly loud. ... Participants were asked to rate the annoyance value of the conversation they heard on scale of one to five, as well as how much they noticed it. Those conducted on a mobile phone in both categories were significantly more annoying and noticeable to the group than face to face ones.
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usually speaking level? Those *what* conducted on a mobile phone? conversations? Omitting this would work if the sentence wasn't. A new paragraph. Again.