BBC News grammatical triumphs
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And they, clearly, have to be mindful of how much office space and shops there are.
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New paragraph starting with 'And', but what are those commas doing there? They unnecessarily break up the sentence. Finally, 'how much office space' and 'how much shops'? Really ought to be.. 'how much office space and how many shops'.