BBC News grammatical triumphs
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He was able to show the breath and width of his experience in office. Every image and every speaker were carefully choreographed to reinforce in the voters' minds the idea of George Bush as a steadfast, principled, say-what-you-mean-and-mean-what-you-say kind of leader. John Kerry is going to work very hard if he is going to push back the Republican momentum of the last month.
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"breadth" "every speaker were"? Should also probably be written as "say what you mean and mean what you say" rather than being hyphenated. He's going to work hard? Do you know that for a fact? Or did you mean he's going to have to work very hard?